Looooooooooooong Novel Excerpt

This is a chapter for my printerfic novel I've been revising for my creative writing class. You know, the seventeenth century one about the girl who wants to be a printer so she crossdresses (as happens) and runs into hijinks (as happens) and prints (as happens if I'm writing it). Anyone with some spare time and the will to concrit will be LOVED FOREVER.

ETA: Trigger warning for assault. She'll be fine though, BUT!

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